
Friends, I am grateful that inspiration continues to find me. Another free verse piece arrived, and I feel my recent writer’s block losing its grip. I hope you enjoy it!
Amnesiac Rising:
Wake disoriented
to the chaotic room,
the clothes
on the floor,
and the sun through
the blinds
to who do
these belong?
The edge of
the bed
now the edge
of the world
Rub the half-
remembered
dreams from
aching eyes
Faces familiar,
nameless ghosts,
Show me a heart
that isn't haunted
What's worthy
is sure to return
The amnesiac
rises
-Brandon White
Show me a heart that isn’t haunted ๐๐ผ I think only those who have experienced life altering events, can truly understand this๐ค
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Thank you, my friend. I hope it hits the mark for others. ๐
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Wonderful! “Rub the half-remembered dreams from aching eyes” – my favorite part. Keep it going!
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I very much appreciate the encouragement! Thank you, my friend!
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Very cool!
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I donโt know why exactly… but I just love this one.
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I feel strongly for it as well. It feels like me getting out of my own way.
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Yes! Thatโs it exactly.
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