
Friends, I was reminded recently of this free verse piece from my debut poetry collection. I hadn’t thought of it in some time. I thought it would be nice to share it here. Feedback is appreciated!
God’s House & the Lone Coyote: The steam from my coffee fogs up the small panes of glass in the backdoor. I often stand here in the morning, staring out at the frozen world. Chain link separates our backyard and an empty field. Beyond the field, a firehouse and a church. I wish it were just the field. I guess I’m thankful that help is no more than a hundred yards away at any moment, and having God’s house in the neighborhood should do wonders for my property value. I watch a lone coyote make his way across the frozen grass just beyond the back fence. He pauses and looks back the way he came, as if reconsidering the choice that brought him here. Eventually, he carries on. I sip my coffee. The morning sun ascends. The world turns. -Brandon White
Too amazingggg
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Thank you, my friend!
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The world turns…this line makes me smile a bit…you take us into a vivid scene…the church that seems to offer “safety” and then this lone wolf coming in as if observing your observations..then “the world turns” as if to say…yup, just another day…☺️. Only you can do that, my friend.
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You fill my heart, my friend. I appreciate you very much.
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I love this one. Can picture the whole thing in my mind. Excellent work, Brandon.
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Thank you, Tara! One of my favorites from the first book!
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It would be too difficult for me to choose a favorite … they’re all so so very good.
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Kind of you to say. 🙏
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I like it. Reconsidering his choice… perhaps turning from God and from help.
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Thanks very much, Brandon! I appreciate the thoughtful feedback! 🙏
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Beautifully captures the scene. As to how nature teaches us to flow with a mesmerizing day!
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Thanks so much, my friend. I’m glad you enjoyed it! 🙏
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😊
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